Everything was breaking down gradually. It seemed that nothing could stick the pieces back, not even with the strongest glue. Hopes seemed to scatter like the red beads of the necklace you gave, which had broken down with a random strike of your hand. Memories had started to fade….but then that afternoon….one SMS from you…
"Need 2 talk,bt no ntwrk coverage….will contact u soon.."
Stupid me, started collecting all the fragments back, into the hand drawn circle…..waited to be put back again like a jigsaw puzzle…
Eyes stuck on the screen of my dear cell phone….looking for his…”contact u soon”…..seconds flew…minutes flew…..hours, days, weeks, months…..
No soon…..no contact…..
Why?
Did you??
Bring back…….HOPE.
Oh man!! could you have related thus any better? Yes its hope, the deceitful thing that chides us. Loved your post. Relived a lot.
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ReplyDeleteit always comes back doesnt it...the haunt...the unexpected.....the hope...and with that the fear of the past......beautiful...
ReplyDeletei hope you wouldn't mind....but i wrote a few lines eons ago....ur post reminded me of it..
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"I MISS YOU"...
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thank u everyone for ur valuable comments
ReplyDeleteWonderful post, will vote for it as soon as I am on laptop! :)
ReplyDelete@sourav:thanx
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